FINAL ASSIGNMENT (50%):
Deadlines:
W9 - SUBMISSION - Draft #1 (submit bb only) - focus on your story
W10-12 – CONSULT - Draft ready for class consult - focus on story/3Act
W13 – SUBMISSION - Final Draft (submit print & bb) - this includes a 5-page script
W10-12 – CONSULT - Draft ready for class consult - focus on story/3Act
W13 – SUBMISSION - Final Draft (submit print & bb) - this includes a 5-page script
ACT1 = Establish Key Character + Motive (focus)
ACT2 = Key Character struggles with Motive
ACT3 = Key Character resolves Motive
LOGLINES
CONSULTS - Week 10 - Fri 5 October 2012 (?/22)
1. Braudon
Leonard must stay clean and keep himself out of prison so that (he must do this or else...)
2. Helmut
Tom (student) must prevent a psycho killer (killed his classmate leroy) from escaping the school premises while waiting for police to arrive
Leonard must stay clean and keep himself out of prison so that (he must do this or else...)
2. Helmut
Tom (student) must prevent a psycho killer (killed his classmate leroy) from escaping the school premises while waiting for police to arrive
3. Doogie
Wendy must save her sister from a paranormal being and the way to do that lies in her dreams.
4. Manmeet
A 20+ yr old man wants to have an affair with his best friend's wife after discovering that his friend had been having an affair with his wife (deceased recently).
5. Greg
A guy who has lost his memory must (do/want something or else)
6. Juliana
Ash must stop Helmi from destroying his father's grave, ends up killing Helmi.
(twist: Ash realizes that Helmi is himself...)
(notes: Helmi is a split image of Ash's father when his father was 25 years old)
7. Willy
Aaron finds his wife chloe dead and wants/struggles to hide the body despite the eerie feeling that someone is watching/stalking him.
8. Yoo Seok
Detective Lim has to solve a murder case or he will lose his job (why is losing his job a big deal?).
9. Shantosh
ASP Krishnan and Insp. Carol Wong carry out an overnight stake out to catch a murder suspect but they discover that the she is a ghost.
ASP & Insp must escape from a female ghost whom they realize had murdered victims in their police case.
10. Felix
A guy named Dion wants to know where about is his biological father (backstory) >> MUST ESTABLISH MOTIVE
A talented guy sneaks into a gig (his favourite band) and performs on stage because wants to be a famous guitarist. (notes: he thinks that he will get the attention from talent scouts if he does this)
(he uses the gig to get talent scouts attention hoping to be a famous guitarist)
11. Farhan
story angle/theme/key message:
When seven sins (in the form of a human, Ean) conflicting with the mind to get the key to the release of the heart.
My story is about Ean who must escape from Brian (threatens to kill). To escape, he needs to go through a locked "magical" door at (a surreal location).
Wendy must save her sister from a paranormal being and the way to do that lies in her dreams.
4. Manmeet
A 20+ yr old man wants to have an affair with his best friend's wife after discovering that his friend had been having an affair with his wife (deceased recently).
5. Greg
A guy who has lost his memory must (do/want something or else)
6. Juliana
Ash must stop Helmi from destroying his father's grave, ends up killing Helmi.
(twist: Ash realizes that Helmi is himself...)
(notes: Helmi is a split image of Ash's father when his father was 25 years old)
7. Willy
Aaron finds his wife chloe dead and wants/struggles to hide the body despite the eerie feeling that someone is watching/stalking him.
8. Yoo Seok
Detective Lim has to solve a murder case or he will lose his job (why is losing his job a big deal?).
9. Shantosh
ASP Krishnan and Insp. Carol Wong carry out an overnight stake out to catch a murder suspect but they discover that the she is a ghost.
ASP & Insp must escape from a female ghost whom they realize had murdered victims in their police case.
10. Felix
A talented guy sneaks into a gig (his favourite band) and performs on stage because wants to be a famous guitarist. (notes: he thinks that he will get the attention from talent scouts if he does this)
(he uses the gig to get talent scouts attention hoping to be a famous guitarist)
11. Farhan
story angle/theme/key message:
When seven sins (in the form of a human, Ean) conflicting with the mind to get the key to the release of the heart.
My story is about Ean who must escape from Brian (threatens to kill). To escape, he needs to go through a locked "magical" door at (a surreal location).
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CONSULTS - Week 11 - Tues 9 October 2012 (?/22)
12. Bee
Michelle must know if Trey really loves her or is just using her to write his screenplay after peeking at the script that he's working on. Will she find out the truth or be faced with another lie? (Answer: Trey is using his script to express how he wants their relationship to be, which does not reflect reality in his real life)
13. Irwin
Reminiscing the memories from old photos, Ellie is controlling her emotions from breaking down as her mind fantasizes of getting back together with her ex boyfriend. (my comments in fb)
14. Yingling
Eve visits a hypnotist and finds out that the reason for the car accident that made her lose her memory.
Eve must use evidence hidden by her husband before they (Eve and husband) had a car accident (accident is a murder attempt where husband died, and she lost her memory) so that she can stop the person who is trying to kill them.
Eve must find & use the evidence hidden by her husband to avoid being killed.
impt info to plant in story:
- Her husband revealed the info during a car journey before being killed in a car accident.
- info husband told her - who the murderer is, why they are targets for the murder, where he hid the evidence, plan to reveal evidence to police to catch murderer if not both of them will be killed
- she lost a portion of her memory during the accident
- car accident happened because the brakes were tampered with
muderer = her friend (who had an affair with her husband?)
15. Reema
Alice must escape from a mask man who is going to kill her.
16. Ashikin
A young couple struggles to save their marriage.
Nashirah must put her pride aside to apologize to her husband and save her marriage.
17. Farrah
Zam wants to kill Shifa to prevent her from being with another guy (she doesn't want to be with him), he succeeds... then he wakes up and realizes it is a premonition...
18. Angeline (ab)
19. Khai (ab)
20. Raven (ab)
21. Khai - the other khai (ab)
22. Stanford (ab)
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Stanford
Claire wants to visit the beautiful fields (name of place) before she passes away from a terminal illness.
Eve must use evidence hidden by her husband before they (Eve and husband) had a car accident (accident is a murder attempt where husband died, and she lost her memory) so that she can stop the person who is trying to kill them.
Eve must find & use the evidence hidden by her husband to avoid being killed.
impt info to plant in story:
- Her husband revealed the info during a car journey before being killed in a car accident.
- info husband told her - who the murderer is, why they are targets for the murder, where he hid the evidence, plan to reveal evidence to police to catch murderer if not both of them will be killed
- she lost a portion of her memory during the accident
- car accident happened because the brakes were tampered with
muderer = her friend (who had an affair with her husband?)
15. Reema
Alice must escape from a mask man who is going to kill her.
16. Ashikin
A young couple struggles to save their marriage.
Nashirah must put her pride aside to apologize to her husband and save her marriage.
17. Farrah
Zam wants to kill Shifa to prevent her from being with another guy (she doesn't want to be with him), he succeeds... then he wakes up and realizes it is a premonition...
18. Angeline (ab)
19. Khai (ab)
20. Raven (ab)
21. Khai - the other khai (ab)
22. Stanford (ab)
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Stanford
Claire wants to visit the beautiful fields (name of place) before she passes away from a terminal illness.
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